Thursday, February 23, 2006


The first draft of the first paragraph of the paper I've been writing needed a little more depth, so I added a few clauses and then cleaned up the grammar. Once it was printed out and in black and white, though, I saw that the new version was horribly written; repeated words, confusing syntax, and who knows what other barriers to readability. Less can be more, and still not be enough.

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